Unit 9 Blog

I have enjoyed learning what I have in this class thus far. Now that it has come to an end I have realized how to make my writing more professional. The one thing that will stick with me is the over usage of propositions and the have verbs (I think that's what they are called!). I didn't realize how much we use them and how different a paragraph can sound when the propositions and have verbs are removed. There are other topics that I would like to research. One topic is concerning preterm babies. It is amazing the way preemies lives are being saved compared to the death rate of preemies about a decade ago. I would want to research the treatment and processes being carried out to help save their lives. That would be a great topic I think.